Rebooting SwordMaster

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Rebooting SwordMaster

Post by Solider Joey Yamamoto on Wed Sep 24, 2014 7:42 pm




Name: Swordmaster (Formally known as SwordBuster)

Height: 150 feet.

Weight: Light, 10000 lbs.

Weapons:

-Chain sword: Combine a longsword with a chainsaw thus the ChainSword was born. This baby can slice and dice to many, many mech alone the way with the long chain like blade swordmaster can slice and dice it. That not all with a handle that turn, the chainsaw part become active as it begin to rev it. By revving it the slash become more powerful then the last one. It can only rev up to three time.


Appearance: Same as top


Bio: The mother and father of Joey  Yamamoto made this mech when the war first starting and from that. They begin to use this mech in there favor in the war. In the year of 2015-2016  they where going good strong with there fight. The mother and father team did good in the war as they have each other back.

The dad was a Kordatins but he left his own race and help the human and his girl  of his dream fight. But during the war something went bad the father die in battle as the mother can not do the mech herself. So what did she did? She retired SwordBuster and give birth to Joey. When Joey was born he want to save the world as the mother smile at him and kiss her. From that She teach joey about the robot when he was old to use it. After when she did Joey mod it to his liking to make it his own as now he call if SwordMaster

Pilots: Joey Yamamoto

Other: the robot move like Joey so when Joey is in the mech his body control the mech for everything



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Re: Rebooting SwordMaster

Post by Aero Stalone on Wed Sep 24, 2014 7:48 pm

First off, why did you make another post? Just edit the one you made before. Second, it seems as though you still need to check your grammar. I know you can spell better than this. Also, did you read my previous review? The punching and kicking thing is unnecessary and redundant.

Is your character half alien like Chi? If he is, there is no way I am going to accept this. That is someone else's idea, that is called plagiarism, my friend. Perhaps, if you copy this into a recent version of Microsoft Word, you will be able to see all of the sentence fragments, incorrect grammatical clauses, and misspellings in your application. Please fix it and edit your post, then post here when you are finished to let me know. Sorry dude, but it's my job.

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Re: Rebooting SwordMaster

Post by Solider Joey Yamamoto on Wed Sep 24, 2014 7:49 pm

Umm she let me do it.
Go on make fun of my disabiliby make me fell useless
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Re: Rebooting SwordMaster

Post by Aero Stalone on Wed Sep 24, 2014 8:00 pm

No one's making fun of you. I have a disabled friend too. Besides, I had no clue you even were disabled.
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Re: Rebooting SwordMaster

Post by Solider Joey Yamamoto on Wed Sep 24, 2014 8:01 pm

I kinda like when they do. It cool
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